Wednesday, October 5, 2011

You

I love that You Dominate my mind as much as my body
the way You grab my throat, telling me I am yours.
I love Your cruelty mixed with kindness
the way You do nasty things to me and whisper sweet nothings in my ear.

I love
That You can take me down into the depths of humiliation and bring me back up
loving me more.

I love
 how the muscles in Your back ripple when You move
the way You tower over me
and that spot on Your shoulder made just for me to lay my head
how Your hand wraps all the way around my neck
the calculating look in Your eyes when You are considering how much more I can take
the expression on Your face when You are getting off on my pain.

I love
who You are and always have been
the Dominant You have become

I love
the fact that Your traits that drive me crazy are some of Your most admirable
how You defend the weak
and never stop trying to make the blind see
that You are impulsive and responsible.
the way You are loyal to a fault
Your stubborn persistence and insistence.

I love 
that You know me better than I know myself
that You love me for me
what we are and have become
that You own me 
mind body and soul.

I love...You
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  1. MikkiOctober 5, 2011 at 1:37 PM

    I do so love comments too.... thought I'd come visit since I saw you were over at mine!

    I love your poem... my favorite part..

    I love
    that You know me better than I know myself
    that You love me for me
    what we are and have become
    that You own me
    mind body and soul.

    I love...You

    Beautiful! Worth every moment of pain! ;o)

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  2. SBGx0October 5, 2011 at 7:48 PM

    I love this .. beautiful!

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  3. StormOctober 6, 2011 at 8:26 AM

    Mikki, Thank you and welcome to my crazy little corner.

    Heather, thank you!

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  4. maui girlOctober 6, 2011 at 9:33 AM

    I wonder whether there any dissonance between your challenges in embracing and coming to terms with your inner self and the honest and open way you pour yourself and your heart into Alpha and your relationship with him as evidenced by this beautiful letter .... How to reconcile the two?

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  5. StormOctober 6, 2011 at 11:31 AM

    maui girl,
    I am not sure that I understand your question...

    I'll have to think about it lol.

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  6. 1ManViewOctober 6, 2011 at 4:35 PM

    Love comes in many forms and many ways... It's not important how it found you, but that it found you. You wear it well, and I enjoyed how you projected it in your writing...

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  7. StormOctober 7, 2011 at 8:05 AM

    1manview, Thank you. Always nice to hear when my writing is enjoyed.

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  8. the late phoenixOctober 7, 2011 at 9:13 AM

    fabulous verse, and i love the overall shape of the poem, like an arrow of love...

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  9. StormOctober 7, 2011 at 2:38 PM

    phoenix,
    thank you.

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  10. faithfulOctober 10, 2011 at 4:33 PM

    beautifully written lil.
    THANK YOU !

    ~faithful

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  11. StormOctober 11, 2011 at 8:33 AM

    faithful, thank you.

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