Tuesday, October 15, 2013

Until There Was Nothing Else

After pissing all over me, he wrapped his hands around my throat and slowly, yet inexorably, pushed my face under the shower head.
I struggled
and I begged
though I'm not entirely sure that I made much sound.
Sucking in small gasps of air when I could, the world faded away
until I was sure
that I couldn't take it for one more second
one
two
three
and he pulled my head out of the water, loosening his grip around my throat.
Then again
and again
and again.
Occasionally shoving his hands in my mouth as I begged
no
no more
please.
my body negating my words
as I leaned in
opened up
and begged for more.
Until he pulled me in close and held me against his chest, as the water made its way down our bodies in hot rivulets.
I wanted his cock in my mouth
needed it like I had needed air only moments before.
I'm not entirely sure how I ended up on my knees
if perhaps he placed me there
or if I pleaded and begged my way down
until he was in my mouth
hard and ready.
And there was water, dreaded water, flowing down him. In my eyes, in my nose, flowing into my mouth as he shoved himself down my throat until I gagged
and begged for no more
again
and again
and again
feeling wetness that wasn't water
making its slow way down my thighs.
As I choked on his cock
sucked in water
blinded by a mixture of soap and water
the world faded further away
until there was nothing else.

26 comments:

  1. wow...wow..wow...a shower scene I crave....thank you for sharing

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  2. I think your writer's block is over. Very hot.

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  3. *i am going bonkers, i absolutley swear i posted a comment here earlier...but its not here...clearly i have lost the plot*

    so yes, breath play absolutley hot, i love the idea of it being in the shower, different sensations...very nice...and being pissed on a bonus lol

    x

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    1. tori,
      you're the second person this week who has mentioned a disappearing comment...You might not be going bonkers!

      Lol yes, it was a win-win.

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  4. All right, heading back upstairs for my vibrator now! HOT HOT HOT

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  5. The muse seems to be re-awakening :)
    I'm not one for pissing, choking, gagging..... but I do wish we had a shower which could accommodate two people. Just a little wish of mine.

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    1. DelFonte,
      yep, now if I can just keep it alive...
      Ooh, a shower that fits two...It's a reasonable wish!

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  6. Damn it!
    I want shower play, now!...but I can only almost breathe clearly and neither one of us are into that whole-drowning thing :P
    Oh, I hope your muse stays.

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    1. Bleuame,
      Lol, well yea, drowning isn't really that awesome.
      Glad to hear you're feeling better!

      I hope the muse stays too.Was thinking of tying her up...

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  7. Wow. Glad I was sitting down for this one!!!!
    Glad you broke through that writers block. This is amazing!

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    1. Sarah,
      Lol, how's that chair treating you?
      I'm glad too. As long as it doesn't comeback anytime soon!

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  8. Wow Lil, this is awesome, and so hot! I'd say you muse is back! :)

    Hugs,
    Roz

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    1. Roz,
      thank you!
      I hope the stubborn muse stays...

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  9. Thank you for sharing lil. This was great to read.

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    1. dancingbarez,
      thank you, and you are quite welcome!

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  10. HO-LEE COW!
    I'm not into all of that....but damn it sure was hot reading about it. You do have a way with words lil! Thanks for sharing!!

    Subrina <3

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