Break me down
make me come undone
burn me up
that I may rise from the ashes.
Take me apart
piece by piece
that I might once again
simply
be.
Cover my eyes and make me blind
so that I can see clearly once again.
Be the keeper of my sight
that I may rest upon your might.
Tie me up
so that I can be free.
Clip my wings
and watch me fly.
Cause me pain
so that I can cry.
Kiss away my tears
as you walk me through my fears
Brush away my objections
and all these silly collections of preconceived notions
as we wander through the years.
Lock me up tight
so that I fear not the things in the night.
Keep me close
that I may not wander far from home.
Tear me down
and lift me up.
Make me breathe
so that I can be
me.
lil: Love this, thanks for sharing :o)
ReplyDeleteThank you BleuAme. Glad you enjoyed it.
DeleteWonderful.
ReplyDeletesophie,
Deletethank you.
Love your poetic soul lil :)
ReplyDeleteDee x
Dee,
Deleteawww, how sweet! Thank you.
Can i just say this made my weep...
ReplyDeleteI've been going thru a bit lately... and it was just so so beautiful. thank you.
Fondles,
DeleteI hope it was a good weep...? I'm glad you liked it.
I'm no good at expressing needs, but apparently they flow fairly well in print!
Very poetic.
ReplyDeleteMy un-poetic mind says at the first line: Oh, please, don't break her down. We want to keep her!
Bas,
DeleteI believe that sometimes we rebuild things. Ourselves, relationships, a single day even. And sometimes we have to tear down existing walls in order to rebuild them into something else.
I think that, like many words, the connotation depends on our personal interpretations. And yes, generally breaking something down is a bad thing. But sometimes it's just creating necessary cracks in the walls.
I'm a wall expert, can you tell lol.
Just lovely xxx
ReplyDeleteJoolz, thank you.
DeleteDid you write this? You capture the dichotomy of emotion and thought perfectly.
ReplyDeleteMinelle,
Deleteyes I did. Thank you.
You Really do. Ive tried to explain what my Dom provides me and have felt the same, rebuilt anew..just beautiful poetry.
DeleteYou Really do. Ive tried to explain what my Dom provides me and have felt the same, rebuilt anew..just beautiful poetry.
Deletesublime,
Deletethank you. I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the post.
Absolutly beautiful
ReplyDeleteThank you Blondie.
DeleteBeautiful!
ReplyDeleteRenee,
Deletethank you!
Absolutely beautiful. You are such a talented writer.
ReplyDeletesunnygirl,
Deleteyou're so sweet. Thank you.
Lovely, this made my day :)
ReplyDeletecolorofakiss,
Deleteglad to hear it!
gosh lil you write beautifully, so expressive.
ReplyDeletex
tori,
Deletethank you.
I may have been accused of being overly expressive on occasion lol.